I've got a song with no lyrics - somebody please help!!!!

[Desert Kev]

Most of the time I write instrumentals. Last weekend I was messing around and composed a short song that evolved into an actual "song"...problem is that it feels like it needs some vocals to fill it out. It's got a Radio Head meets Talking Heads meets Paul Simon sort of vibe going on. If anyone is interested in attempting something over this please let me know and I'll send you the file privately.

Thanks for considering it!

Kevin

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10790663

[reitze]

Kevin,
I did one of my improv's to it - I could upload it on youtube but don't want to "own it" on you - in bad form. I'm sure someone else could sing it better and you'd want to re-do it for sure... Adding vocals cries out for a little less of the jazzy-stuff during the words, and then perhaps a guitar lead in between... Words I captured listening to what sang-out-improv were...

0:34
When I see your face baybe
I gotta know
I gotta know where your going
know what your showing
Know what your gonna know

You got know what your gonna know
Know what your showin
You got that glow
You gotta know
---repeats of those... 1:40-maybe a lead...
1:55 humming along...
I see you walking there
walking too and fro
I got
I got to let you know
You got
You got to know
You let it show
You got that Glow

I've got
Got to know
That you've got that show...

do do dod dod doo do. (while tpping my dog's nose)
You gott know... (not keeping up on keyboard )

Let it show
let it show
Let it show
let it show
Let it show
let it show
Oh baybe I love your glow
I love your show
I love you so
do you know
You got that glow

---- it seemed it could easily take on more for either a prego-wife or a christian theme --- Let me know if you want the improv up on youtube. I do think I can make it "non-public" so only my youtube friends and those with direct links see it (could either post-link here or PM w/ you).

[Desert Kev]

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